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SUMMER Tess Rowley - Fish Bowl Residency ISSUE 267 Dec 2019 - Feb 2020 Ellen Shanley - Chasing a Writing Dream
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PUBLISHED BY ISSUE 267 Dec 2019 - Feb 2020 ISSN 1444-2922 Contents Editorial and Production Sandra Makaresz Editor Glenise Clelland Guest Artist 3 Your Daily Horoscope Green Fox Studio Rebecca Jenssen Design CPX Printing & Logistics 4 One Day, America Printing Ellen Shanley Submissions Members can submit Milestones or details of 6 The Struggle of Second Languages Events or Competitions and Opportunities, Ella Tait or pitch articles for WQ, by emailing us at editor@qldwriters.org.au 8 The Fish Bowl Residency QWC reserves the right to edit all submissions with regard to content and word length. Tess Rowley Advertising 10 Write On! Advertising rates, deadlines and dimensions and other information on how to advertise in Louise Thorenfeldt WQ is available at qldwriters.org.au/advertise. For advertising enquiries please contact editor@qldwriters.org.au 11 Chasing the Wild Pineapple QWC members enjoy a reduced advertising Lesley Synge rate. Before booking an advertisement potential advertisers should read QWC’s 12 The Spanish Writing Retreat Advertising Terms and qldwriters.org.au/advertise Conditions at Gail Tagerro 14 Born to the Sea Lori-Jay Ellis Cynthia Tate Samantha Hope Project Manager 16 Queensland Writers Centre Program Jenn Bell Administrator 18 Love You to Death Isaac Howard Luke Madsen Callum McDonald 22 Wicked Obscenity Sophie Bafekr Samantha Tan Nicole Walsh 24 Competitions and Opportunities Management Committee Andrea Baldwin 28 Members Milestones Chair Ann Wilson Vice Chair 29 Kym Hausmann Treasurer Carleton Chinner Secretary Sandra Makaresz Andrea Brosnan Sarah Thornton Angela Samut Judy Gregory Ordinary Members WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 1
ISSN 1444-2922 ISSUE 267 PUBLISHED BY GUEST ARTIST Editorial Sandra Makaresz Glenise Clelland Editor Cover Illustration: Midnight Blues (Oil on Canvas) Glenise’s next exhibition is in March 2020 (14th-22nd) at the Richard Randall Studio Mt Coo-tha Botanic Gardens, Brisbane. www.gleniseclelland.com.au Biography: hopefully spend at least a few hours dedicating ourselves to reading for For the past 25 years Glenise has been working from her studio at Noosa North Shore. Her studio has been surrounded by acres of writing time inside the Queensland Writers Centre. lily ponds and tall melaleuca trees The beautiful blues on our cover were created by artist, GleniseClelland, and where the ever changing light and inspired by her home surrounds at Noosa North Shore. Recently though, the shapes have been a constant source of inspiration for her new work – being evacuated and facing the uncertainty of not knowing whether their mostly in oils. homes would survive. It’s a story many are facing around Australia. So, as we take time out to refresh over summer, we should also take time to think about others – the battles they face and what we can do to make even a small contribution to the lives of those around us. As writers, empathy is one of our greatest assets. One we should embrace both on the page and in life. Be kind to each other, have an amazing summer, and we hope to see you at the Writing Centre in 2020. Editors Correction, Issue 266: John Synott’s dates should have read 1949 - 2019 in good faith and accept no responsibility for any misinformation or problems arising from any misinformation. The views expressed by contributors or advertisers (including advertising supplying inserts) are not necessarily those 2 WQ
Your Daily Horoscope by Rebecca Jessen Aquarius, 1 July, 3018 Take it easy today, Aquarius; when it comes to matters of the planetary, quietly go your own way. This is a day where all patient sentiments overwhelm and emotions timetable you. The point? Well, misery. Sometimes you crave celestial release—but don’t disengage. Sunday’s balsamic morsel suggests asking for existence. With Someone in your life has twenty-nine unattached motivations and chaos-like future holds for you? Call now to get a full horoscope chart reading. Your Daily Horoscope is a found poem composed of text sourced from a variety of daily horoscopes, and manipulated using Gregory Kan and Hera Lindsay Bird’s app http://glassleaves.herokuapp.com. Rebecca lives in Brisbane and grew up in South-Western Sydney. She is the award-winning author of verse-novel Gap (UQP 2014). Her debut poetry collection Ask Me About the Future is forthcoming with UQP in 2020. Rebecca’s writing has been published in Overland, Meanjin, Rabbit Poetry Journal, Going Down Swinging, The Lifted Brow, Cordite Poetry Review, Mascara Literary Review, Tincture Journal, Verity La, Voiceworks and more. She holds a First Class Honours Degree in Creative Writing from QUT. WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 3
One Day, America! By Ellen Shanley When I was just twelve years old, I decided that I would Everyone kept saying what a great career teaching was, one day live in Los Angeles. There was a good reason for especially because, “you can teach anywhere.” Okay, I it: I wanted to write television. And, to my young mind, thought, I will. there was only one place to do that. With that, the research began. A year out from my Those around me suspected it was something I would tentative departure date, I researched as many avenues grow out of. I was, after all, interested in other things too. to the US as I could think of, expecting some of them I considered professions in law, psychology, education – to be dead ends. There were multiple visa pathways I eventually did become a high school English teacher. available. The O1 visa was perfect for artists, but I didn’t Yet, even though I kept pursuing writing in Brisbane, I have anywhere near enough accolades for it. Student never could let go of that initial idea. That hope, that visas, such as the J1, would get me there if I was accepted belief, that suddenly all my writing dreams would come into a course of study, but they had restrictions. Namely, true, if only I made it to LA. no working. Not ready to spend my entire life savings, I looked further into possible working visas like the H-1B. And then I saw it: the E3. person I told replied, “Screenwriting? At UCLA? Everyone It was beautiful. The E3 visa was a working visa open, wants to do that. You will never get in.” The only catch was that I did have to have a job already They were right, I thought. It was a bad plan. lined up. Despite my knowledge of the reluctance of employers to hire a random Aussie they’d only met via Soon, another opportunity presented itself. I was visiting a friend in Melbourne when she told me she was going on a trip to the US. “Take me with you,” I joked. To my surprise, she did. I took the money I’d saved for study York, Boston, Washington D.C, Philadelphia, New Orleans, Las Vegas, San Francisco, and, at last, Los Angeles. I had, in the lead up, convinced myself that going there once would be enough. I would get it out of my system, surely. In fact, the opposite turned out to be true: visiting the land of movies and TV only fed my desire to live there. So I tossed out my plan for exchange, but, as for my plan to study there, I wasn’t quite prepared to let that one go. I mulled it over for another couple of years, trying to 4 WQ
I reshaped my CV and cover letter over and over, adding more punctuation marks and enthusiastic statements willing to pay the prevailing wage. While the prevailing every time. I did countless interviews at 5am (one at wage is, in theory, the wage an employer would pay an 3am) and I emailed probably every school in Los Angeles American to do the same job, the way it’s determined, in reality, is much more complex. From there, the plan executed perfectly. It took roughly Curiously, the E3 had no restrictions on whether or not four weeks from starting the application process with my I could study while working, as long as I continued to lawyer to get the visa in hand. And, in July 2018, I stepped meet the requirements of the visa. Maybe I could take a course at UCLA after all, I thought. America. Oh, and I was accepted into UCLA. What’s more, at the of all kinds which could be taken online or in person. A television Drama pilot script I wrote while in the Anyone could study the course of their choosing. A Program, was announced as the winner of the 2018- great option. Next, I investigated the famed master’s 2019 UCLA Professional Programs Writing for Television program. It certainly had cache, but it was two years competition. As I rushed up on stage to collect my award, long and full-time study. Not to mention the cost. I couldn’t help but think that, as long as it had taken me Actually, let’s not mention it. That brought me to door to get there, I’d got the timing right after all. number three: the Professional Program in Writing for Television. It was the perfect option. The program was Ellen Shanley is a screenwriter from Redland City, Queensland. a year long, it was at graduate level, and classes were Her script ’The Longest Day’ won the TV Drama Pilot category held either online or at night on campus. Of course, of the 2018-2019 UCLA Professional Programs Writing for I readily applied. Television competition. Her writing has been selected for the Much was to be done before my plan was realised, of the Austin Film Festival. Ellen also advanced to the second however, namely that I still had to secure a job and an round of selections in NBC’s Writer’s on the Verge in 2019. She E3. I found a lawyer to help me with the visa, so at least I can be found on Twitter as @Elle Shanley. WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 5
The Struggle of Second Languages By Ella Tait The intricacies of the French language never came humour, to join in a conversation, I found I was a very shy naturally to me. Aside from my appalling accent, the person. grammar always appeared like a maze of past participles, future conditionals and unforeseen errors. I was, as At the core of learning a language is the willingness my tutors delicately explained, ‘not a gifted language to slip-up, to use incorrect grammar and be publicly student.’ corrected - not only by friends, but also by strangers at a ticket desk and, humiliatingly, by small children. And yet, as I stared down the barrel of an eight-week I quickly realised, I did not like making mistakes. Whenever I had the opportunity to avoid speaking, without my parents, I remained hopeful. Despite my clear I took it. As you can probably gather, becoming a selective language. I had been raised in multi-cultural Brisbane, after all. While my French exchange may not have been a resounding success, it gifted me a permanent admiration Israeli father. My aunty spoke English to her colleagues during the day, and Spanish to her parents over Skype at years that followed, I befriended an Afghan family and night. Perhaps naively, I had been passive with the belief that the human brain is intrinsically capable of decoding English (complete with Australian accents) in six months. I cities. of jealousy that my multilingual colleagues had the keys to two, three and even four worlds. At the core of learning a exchange as a teenager, recounting stories of my inability language is the willingness to order a water bottle from the school’s tuck-shop, I knew that beneath the humour my privilege was deafening. to slip-up, to use incorrect grammar and be publicly is a new and scary endeavour, the luxury of packing corrected. their failings is simply not an option. For many people, learning a language is not a hobby, but rather an absolute I was, expectedly, wrong. In the weeks that followed, sense of belonging. While foreign languages remain a mystery to me, dramatically shifted. I discovered that language could be isolating. Absent my ability to tell stories, to understand 6 WQ
To those who are learning, or who have already mastered, and words that sound the same but mean something English as a second language, the shy little mute within our childhood grappling with the there / their / they’re expand this learning to writing, creating and exploring, nightmare, after all. And we can all agree the English the Queensland Writers Centre is saving you a seat. language was having a laugh when it brought ‘too’, ‘to’ and ‘two’ into the world. by a host of new confusing, vague and seemingly interchangeable (or are they?) vocabulary choices. The words ‘eminent’ or ‘imminent’ or ‘immanent’, for example, continue to astound me - eminent means someone famous or distinguished, imminent describes something that’s about to happen, and immanent means operating or existing within. Or what about ‘discreet’ and Ella successfully completed her internship at the Queensland ‘discrete’? Although discreet and discrete come from the Writer Centre this year, here she discusses the privilege of learning a second language for fun versus the necessity, and graduate from QUT. She plans on pursuing a legal career, and means separate, individual or detached. I’d like to have a bringing her love of reading, writing and creating along for the chat with whoever is responsible for this. journey. HAVE YOU WRITTEN A BOOK? IS IT IN A DRAWER WAITING FOR SOMEDAY? LET US HELP YOU RELEASE IT TO THE WORLD. • We gladly accept submissions from new authors • A full evaluation given (not a Vanity Publisher) • We have been in the industry for over 18 years • A full copy edit is included in quote as well as 10 complimentary copies of your book • All our books are available for sale on Amazon worldwide • We are happy to also include Social Media placement as well as Zeus Publications website as part of our service • Your book will be published in Paperback and Electronic format (eBook) FOR ENQUIRIES PLEASE CONTACT US Phone: 07 5575 5141 Email: sales@zeus-publications.com Web: www.zeus-publications.com WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 7
The Fish Bowl Residency By Tess Rowley When I heard that I’d been given the opportunity to be When I’m writing, I get lost in my own creative space and life goes on without me. This Fishbowl experience has be mentored by Sandra Makaresz, I felt as excited as if I’d proved just that. I’m quite oblivious to people passing by won the gold lotto. I also thought, what does this mean, what’s expected of me, and even, can I do it? Aren’t we creative people strange characters? Full of a young boy was watching me, nose pressed up against the glass. Having no idea how long he’d been there, our work in case someone else thinks it’s no good. I smiled and gave a little wave. He looked at me with a serious expression and mouthed, ‘Where’s the toilet?’ As soon as I entered this new adventure, I was made to feel welcome. I had my own little spot, a table set up I’ve had a few inside visitors too, who step up behind the for me, with clear glass walls in the front, looking out to velvet gold curtains to enquire as to how I’m going. This the library. Behind me I’m surrounded by crushed velvet has been good for me, as most of them are volunteers. curtains, very theatrical, and like Alice through the looking I’ve discovered the work they do, and the diversity and glass, I walked straight through and took centre stage. richness they bring to QWC. My major manuscript, Remembering Nazareth, which I’ve been nursing for some years, was sent to Sandra My Fishbowl residency has for feedback before my arrival. Her suggestions and provided me with a space critical evaluation have been invaluable, and I’ve enjoyed breathing new life into my work. The story of Nazareth to research and write, given House, Wynnum, once a children’s orphanage, will never end. By writing the accounts of the girls who lived there me permission to dream. in the 1940s-50s I’ve heard more and more stories from people who either knew someone, or had a relative who’d Writing here and having great access to books from shared the same experience. I’ve pushed hard to give the library shouldn’t come as a surprise, but it’s been a voice to these women, many who are now deceased. To component that has helped enormously when I’ve needed write about someone’s lived experience is an honour, to increase my knowledge of what I’m writing about. The especially when their journey has been such a painful one John Oxley Library is amazing, and the people who work in the recalling. there are so helpful. I learned so much from Sandra. She introduced me to In between time I’ve written a piece about the proposed ‘Speculative Biography,’ which has opened so many worlds development of Toondah Harbour, in the Cleveland for my future writing. It helped me inject warmth into the wetlands. It’s still a work in progress. I live at that side of sometimes harsh, cold stories from the past. town, so the potential destruction of this wildlife habitat, on my watch, hits hard. 8 WQ
I’ve also written a piece about an Aboriginal man who I’ve known for some years, about his life with all its ups The Farmer’s Wife and downs. By Tess Rowley The drought has been a topic throughout my weeks here and I’ve taken a few drops of time to polish up a piece of prose. The luxury of having this quiet space is that I Looking back to when the rains fell, we’d jump can dip into lots of my creative bowls and splash around the puddles so as not to splash, and dash a bit. The expectation of 20 – 30 hours per week in the across the paddock, shirts held high overhead, retirees, my life had become busier, so I needed to do a lapping like sails. bit of juggling to slide into this new regime. Thank you, How could I know My residency journey was made smoother with the help of Jenn and Callum, particularly around my computer, would now be recalled and treasured? when it just wouldn’t do what I asked of it. Thanks to both Measured moments of childhood, of you. each drop an inch of nourishment The last amazing observation of Queensland Writers Centre has been the three Tim Tam biscuits that have sat to our weathered, tree stick arms. where such a phenomenon could happen. The fact that one has gone missing is because I couldn’t stand the This drought has parched my family leaving bleached white bones My Fishbowl residency has provided me with a space to that chafe and crack. research and write, given me permission to dream – and So I look back. been given the gift of writing. The horizon teases us with clouds, our eyelids, shrouds draped over too many endings. Lost crop, lost stock the seasons merge. Not a single tear could fall Tess lives in Queensland and has written poems and stories since THE FISHBOWL RESIDENCY PROVIDES WRITING SPACE, Who Wanted To Paint The Moon, was awarded second place in MENTORSHIP AND ASSISTANCE FOR A WRITER TO COMPLETE the 2018 Hope Literary Prize (Brotherhood of St Laurence) and A TEN-WEEK RESIDENCY. was published by Simon & Schuster. Her current manuscript, INTERESTED EMAIL ADMIN@QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 9
Write On! By Louise Thorenfeldt In 2019, after the success of the 2018 program in Mount the form of a concert or performance event, with morning Tamborine, the SRRC began working withthe Writers or afternoon tea adding to the community feel.The Centre to deliver a Creative Life Writing program under an Age Friendly Community grant funded by the Department their experience with others. A number of participants of Communities, Disability Services and Seniors. Delivered chose to perform their poetry or memoirs, while others in six locations throughout the Scenic Rim, the workshops were designed by and in consultation with QWC and Createplacemembers. The program was initiated with others delve into an emotional journey celebrating their the knowledge that telling stories can be a cathartic strengths and stories of survival of either themselves or experience,setting old memories free in a vulnerable and loved ones. compassionate literary journey. Createplace facilitators found the program to be a great The Createplace team designed this free, creative success, with participants engaging from the outset, forms, including prose, poetry and fairy tales, as well as also found it was and imperative to incorporate safety information about digital storytelling. Everything was supported by a workbook for participants to use as a marketed to Scenic Rim’s older residents and those in risk humbling experience. It was aprogram that allowed these fragile, unhealed stories to embark on a journey where challenges. they could be told in a supportive environment. Each location had a health representative present, and several In each of the six locations, Kooralbyn, Rathdowney, Kalbar, Harrisville, Tamborine and Beechmont, the participants healing process, with others exchanging contact details to stay in touch. The resounding message was the wish for through two,two-and-a-half hour workshops over a two- creative skills development in writing and storytelling, Louise is studying a Bachelor of Creative Writing at The belonging and reduce marginalisation; empowering its University of the Sunshine Coast and interned with Queensland Writers Centre during the year. Writing for Trauma is a growing participants to pursue similar creative opportunities in area of interest for Queensland Writers Centre,as well as the the future. wider community. As part of our continuing support for this emerging writing activity, the Writers Centre is working with a number of partner organisations to provide these specialised storytelling format to develop a short piece of prose and collaboration between Queensland Writers Centre, Createplace, a collective of arts health practitioners, and the Scenic Rim Community Showcase. The Community Showcase took Regional Council (SRRC). 10 WQ
Tropical Frogs By Lesley Synge But it’s late. Tropical North Queensland (FNQ) from Ubud in Bali, where she frogs are chorusing into the night. Comet Translators, and now she’s writing a grant proposal. Eve has packed, ready Under World Heritage rainforest canopy, within earshot for the next gig and of the Barron Falls – the very locale in which Thea Astley is already a-move, lived and found the inspiration to write Hunting the Wild a-blaze. Brilliant, unstoppable. Pineapple (1979) and It’s Raining in Mango (1987) – Eve is, as usual, dedicating her energies to community cultural development. Currently the Cairns regional network representative for Eve’s early life in Brisbane bred resilience and Queensland Writers Centre, Eve has previously served organisational skills so when, in the early 1990s, she faced on the Management Committee. She laments the bind a lack of support for practitioners of the arts in Far North she’s in – most of her writing is not the creative kind QLD, 1700 kms from Brisbane, she set about creating it. she envisaged three decades ago but rather in the arts And has not stopped since. advocacy model – and she is still frustrated by ‘a chronic lack of money for the arts’. A poet and writer herself, she instigated and emceed Poetry and Pasta nights in Kuranda, going on to found ‘Tell me more about the vision to grow CTWF internationally,’ such enduring organisations as Arts Nexus and Cairns I cajole, having gleaned it’s progressive, ambitious and Tropical Writers Festival (CTWF). global in scope. But it’s late. Tropical frogs are chorusing into the night. Comet Eve has packed, ready for the next gig and is already a-move, a-blaze. Brilliant, unstoppable. Lesley Synge is a founding member of Queensland Writers Centre. Her latest publication is a poetry collection, Signora Bella’s Grand Tour (2019). In 2018 she won the Arts Central Queensland Lorna McDonald Essay Prize and the Ravello Tales (Italy) short story competition. CHASING THE WILD PINEAPPLE PAYS TRIBUTE TO THEA ASTLEY, AUTHOR OF HUNTING THE WILD PINEAPPLE AND FOUNDING MEMBER OF THE QUEENSLAND WRITERS CENTRE. WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 11
The Spanish Writing Retreat By Gail Tagarro Until this year, I’d attended a spiritual retreat in England that we were all serious about our writing, everyone had long, long ago, a meditation retreat on the Gold Coast written for years (not necessarily published) and the a few years back and a yoga retreat in Bali in 2015. environment was supportive. Considering writing has been such an important part of my life, it’s surprising that this writers’ retreat was Breakfasts and lunches were included as part of the retreat, so our day began with breakfast at 9am. From 9.45 am until 1.30 pm was quiet time, when we worked So, why Spain? in silence on our writing. Imagine the only sounds being Interestingly, other writers I’ve spoken to aren’t surprised the tinkling of goats’ bells, the water splashing over rocks in the streams of the valley below and the buzz of bees in While some writers have the discipline and lifestyle the lavender and wisteria of the garden. especially as I’m working on other writers’ books most days. Receiving constructive, objective Why did I choose Spain instead of a local writer’s retreat feedback from other writers (or elsewhere in the world)? Largely, because both books I was working on are based in Spain. I also wanted to return after a 15-year absence. Spain holds a special place in my in my writing. heart. After the two-week retreat, I planned to travel around a The steep mountains and deep valleys of the Sierra bit and make it a working holiday. After all, why travel to Nevada were the views we feasted our eyes on as we the other side of the world for just two weeks? wrote. We could move around to a variety of writing spots The writers’ retreat was held in a 400-year-old guesthouse, as our fancy took us: the writing table in our bedroom, the ‘Casa Ana’, restored in the Spanish style. It’s in the village of sitting room, outside on the patio, various little secluded Ferreirola, in the Alpujarras region of Andalucía, southern nooks on several levels outdoors. Spain, with stunning views of the rocky Sierra Nevada mountain range, 1,000 metres above sea level. By lunchtime, we were ready for food and chats and always looked forward to the amazing Spanish meals I arrived for the 8–22 June retreat. Having packed for prepared for us by the private chef. summer, I was glad of the only light jacket and wrap I’d From 2.30pm until 6.30 pm, it was silent writing time week. There were just six of us, all English speakers. Two again. lived in Spain, one in England, one in Germany and one in the States. I think we all wondered what genres everyone Between 6.30 and 7.30pm, over a drink and nibbles on wrote, and their writing expertise. It was good to discover the patio, we’d chat, or rest, or keep writing in our room. 12 WQ
We could go for walks through the narrow streets of the A couple of the other writers keep a daily journal as a village with its traditional white washed houses. Ferreirola has only around 28 permanent inhabitants. The region is renowned by hikers for its many trails and its spectacular taken up daily journaling again. A couple of paragraphs is scenery. My priority was progressing with my books, so I better than no writing at all. only did a few of the shorter walks. me two weeks of pure indulgence for my own writing. For an additional cost, we could participate in three dinners a week at the retreat, or walk 10 minutes up two books I’d written years ago, and I’m happy to say the winding, largely deserted road to one of the three I achieved that goal. My next goal is publishing them both country restaurants, or buy our own food to cook in between this year and next year. the kitchen. I couldn’t have wished for a more ideal, peaceful, beautiful location. With most of the meals and housekeeping taken The writers’ retreat gave me two care of, we were free just to…write. weeks of pure indulgence for my own writing. 5.30 pm for a group critiquing session, included in the retreat price. Casa Ana organises a resident mentor for the duration of the writing retreat, and she led the critiquing sessions. We read an excerpt of our writing, around 1,500 words, to the group, then each writer gave their feedback, followed by the mentor’s feedback. This was useful. Constructive feedback may: • Reinforce your perception about some issue with your writing, or highlight issues that you haven’t been able to see yourself • Give suggestions around character, plot, dialogue, and more. For an additional cost, three sessions of private mentoring a week were available with the resident mentor. Writers submitted an extract of 1,500 words for review, then had a one-hour one-on-one session to receive feedback and discuss their writing issues. Receiving constructive, objective feedback from other Gail Tagarro is the author of Ten Ways to Super-Charge your Writing Skills. She is a writing coach, author and accredited I learnt how I could carry a support network back into the editor. She also provides self-publishing services to Australian ‘real world’ by teaming up with another writer for regular writers. She can be contacted on 0405695534 or editors4you@ critiquing sessions. This is a valuable outcome to keep me gmail.com. Her website is editors4you.com.au and facebook is on task. editors4you. WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 13
Born to the Sea By Cynthia Tate My father was born to the sea. His father was a merchant worth of mixed lollies, choosing each one with care, on seaman turned accountant and his mother was the the way home. We spent long mornings in front of the daughter of missionaries. Her trips to visit them from beach house, when the tide was high, paddling Dad-built her boarding school in rural NSW over Christmas break surf skis into the mangroves up the creek. Even though meant a long sea voyage up the Queensland coast to the Torres Strait Islands. on the high tide as they moved themselves from creek to creek. Dad started his seafaring with a small toy yacht built for him, fully rigged, which he would launch by hand into the For my father, the yearning to take the family out on longer bay. A tiny sabot would follow this. By the time I came along, second of three, it was the ‘Shark’ boat. So named because grew. We burnt the shark boat in a funeral ceremony on of the red and white mouth and eyes and teeth painted the diminishing beach in front of our house and upgraded on the bow. This enabled the boat to ‘eat up the waves’ as we travelled and tacked back and forth. It was thrilling, With each boat we could adventure further from shore. not only the eating of the waves, but the unexpectedly reliable splash of salt water spray, while I watched the joy in the beginning of our time in the Whitsundays. on my father’s face as he skippered the dinghy, squiring Places where we could be alone without other close us all, Mum, elder brother and later younger sister, and human contact for days at a time. even our Airedale terrier. I wouldn’t want to say that was the last time I enjoyed being in a boat, but it was the last time for all of us, all six Dad’s face would be half hidden including the dog. United in the joy of the tilted stability of a boat pushed down into the water to carve through, under a thick spray jacket, and while the sails harnessed the wind. We gathered on the water would pool in the brim, upward side to hold the boat, to steady it with our bodies, maximising speed, before the call for ‘ready about’ would drip downward to the wash that boom of the mainsail and to release the jib for the change swirled around our feet. in direction. Slade Point, where these boat adventures began was the idyll of my childhood. We scampered around the sand My mother, who still impresses and leaves me in awe, hills, clambered the crumbling rocks at the Point, snuck would have spent about a week in advance organising through narrow cave passes as the waves brought the and cooking food and then packing it away in the small tide in. We believed we named the Wishing Well, a rock nooks and crannies that boats abound with. She was pool replenished everyday by the waves. Pulling ourselves also, dreadfully, always seasick. It would last for at least to the bottom we’d dive down to collect coins to buy 10c 14 WQ
crossness, it was hard to tell. She would take herself down below deck while we were sailing to our destination, and present to us food for lunch and a cold soft drink. And we would all sit close in the cockpit while Dad skippered, or my brother or sister, and look out over the water toward the horizon between the islands where nothing seemed to be. I was seasick too. From the moment I would step on to a boat larger than a dingy I would start to feel the nausea and discomfort of the disjunct between the inner ear and the eye. In time, many things cued the feel of nausea – from sunscreen, to marine plastic to the smell of diesel engines. My brother rightly pointed out that it was all in misery. My Dad says, that the holidays and times on the boat were the best of his life. His kinship to the sea, to sailing, to the complex business that is working out how to point the boat and set the sail, to maximising speed but never at the cost of safety, put him in his element. I can see his face, one trip back from St Bees, in the swell of an impending cyclone. The waves were twenty feet above us. He would turn the helm in towards the wave as we came to it and then, like a surfer, the boat would glide down into the trench like the dolphin Ben Lexen had designed it to be. As if the boat, and my father, belonged there. Dad’s face would be half hidden under a thick spray jacket, and water would pool in the brim, wash that swirled around our feet. He looked serious. He looked capable. He looked like he belonged, and we, even seasick me, not asleep but huddled and wet on the downward side of the cockpit. We felt safe, and that this challenge was no more nor less than he could handle. Safe in the knowledge that this return trip would go on to become a shared anecdote about our family, our boat, our holidays, our time together – to which all of us belonged. Cynthia always gets seasick when out sailing but still went every school holiday and long weekend on the family boat as a child. and watching Korean historical dramas. She earns a living as a Learning Designer. WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 15
QUEENSLAND WRITERS CENTRE 2020 PROGRAM JANUARY - MARCH START WITH A STORY THU FEB 06 - FEB 27 | 6.00PM - 8.00PM | 4 WEEK COURSE Whether you want to write dynamic, new characters TUTOR or breathe life into existing ones, this workshop is for Emily Larkin you! Create character profiles, practice writing in your TICKETS protagonist’s voice, and understand the function of $125 – $245 different point-of-view and tenses. Discuss what makes a compelling protagonist/antagonist, and write memorable character descriptions. NOVELISTS’ BOOTCAMP SAT MAR 07 | 10.30AM - 4.30PM | 2 DAY COURSE Prepare yourself for two full days of intensive brainstorming, TUTOR plotting, and practical exercises so you can arm yourself Kim Wilkins with the tools and frameworks to support your story. You TICKETS will learn how to face your writing fears, create a book $299 – $420 map, and guide your ideas into a workable narrative. Successful completion of the course will leave you with a comprehensive plan to guide your first draft. YEAR OF THE NOVEL SUN FEB 02 - OCT 04 | 10.30AM - 4.30PM | 5 SESSION COURSE Year of the Novel returns in 2020 so you can follow through TUTOR with your New Year’s resolution to get that book out of your Melissa Ashley head and onto the page. Attend five full-day workshops TICKETS throughout the year, each detailing the steps you need to $595 – $795 take when writing the first draft of your novel. Run by award- winning author, researcher, and tutor, Melissa Ashley, receive practical advice and inspiration. RABBIT HOLE WRITING CHALLENGE SAT JAN 11| 10AM - 4PM | 2 DAY EVENT Take the challenge! The Rabbit Hole Writing Challenge TUTOR is back, running from 10:00am - 4:00pm across the Judy Gregory weekend. As a special new year’s challenge, start 2020 by TICKETS writing 2,020 - 20,200 in two days! Hop on down to the FREE Queensland Writers Centre and join a supportive group of committed writers. To book please phone (07)38429922 or jump onto this link https://cutt.ly/Le3643M 16 WQ
QUEENSLAND WRITERS CENTRE 2020 PROGRAM JANUARY - MARCH WRITING SEX & LOVE SAT FEB 15 |10.30AM - 1.30PM | 1 DAY WORKSHOP Learn to write scenes of love and lust that will make your TUTOR readers blush instead of cringe. Everybody does ‘it’. But Kylie Scott is writing about it right for you? And if so, how do you TICKETS go about it? We’ll cover the basics of detailing physical $60 – $115 attraction, the emotional journey, what a sex scene in your book can achieve, and how it should all be handled. You can also watch this workshop via online live stream! THE HERO & HEROINE’S JOURNEY SAT JAN 25 | 10.30AM - 4.30PM | 1 DAY WORKSHOP This workshop explores where literature and psychology TUTOR converge. Drawing from Joseph Campbell, Maureen Lauren Elise Daniels Murdock, Caroline Myss, and Carl Jung, examine character TICKETS flaws, tests, and transformations and the satisfying storylines $100 – $190 these create. Trace the classic hero and heroine’s journeys as psychological templates. You can also watch this workshop via online live stream! CRITICAL READING FOR WRITERS SUN FEB 23 | 10.30AM - 4.30PM | 1 DAY WORKSHOP In this workshop, literary expert and editor, Laurel Cohn, will TUTOR teach you how reading the work of other authors will help Laurel Cohn you develop a range of technical skills and aesthetic ideas TICKETS that will support your own writing. Through looking at a $100 – $190 range of excerpts, you will focus on different story elements that are relevant to both fiction and narrative non-fiction writers, such as voice, backstory, setting and description. EFFECTIVE ONLINE WRITING & EDITING SUN FEB 09| 10.30AM - 4.30PM | 1 DAY WORKSHOP If you write your own web content, there’s a lot you need TUTOR to know to do it successfully. Web content gives us a lot Kylee Bristow to consider, including writing style, writing design, and TICKETS ensuring your content is found and shared. This workshop $100 – $190 will give you the knowledge you need to write effective and dynamic web content that your readers will understand. You can also watch this workshop via online live stream! To book please phone (07)38429922 or jump onto this link https://cutt.ly/Le3643M WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 17
Love You to Death By Luke Madsen Don’t say it. Don’t say it. Don’t say it. checking in to ruin his night and quite possibly his whole ‘Busy night tonight?’ he asked the Uber driver. Noah would’ve happily said nothing, but he loathed to seem rude. He also loathed to make small talk – a rock and a His heart fell into a hole as she clicked into Tinder. hard place, and all that. Still, better to be cliché than an Mercifully, she didn’t check the match. Instead she clicked asshole. comparison. ‘Last ride.’ The driver was a guy with a face and two arms, a central nervous system…Noah could care as little for his ‘How old were you in this pic?’ name or his strangest Uber experience as he could for a Noah shook his head. ‘See…this is why I hate Tinder.’ Minty or a— She grinned. ‘So it wasn’t bullshit?’ BING. Noah looked to his right, where Sara checked a ‘What wasn’t?’ She swished her thumb across her phone, scrolled up ‘Restaurant wants me to leave a review,’ she said. to the beginning of their message thread. She read his ‘You checked in?’ A million thoughts binged into his brain: Tinder showed me. It was enough to make me stop she checked in did she tag me did she enjoy herself are we loathing Tinder for a few minutes. Upside down smile.’ even Facebook friends am I wearing my ‘adult’ underwear ‘It’s true,’ he said simply. After all, beginning a relationship my bed is freshly made fucking laundry day coincidence by bullshitting someone wasn’t exactly feng shui. Still, it will it happen on the couch oh my god. never stopped him wondering why this wasn’t common knowledge? And now he was talking to himself: Feel free ‘When you were paying,’ she said, and smiled a little smile. to stop rehashing old qualms— He couldn’t tell if it was wry or not. Or maybe he was just paranoid. Their eyes met. Her eyes. Blue, uninhabited planets… claim. A guy from uni once told him to worry only about himself—he side-eye spied on her as she typed out a the eyes, and perhaps he was right. He watched her eyes review: Ambiance on point. Vegan options not so much. search his face… His shoulders fell. ‘Sorry about dinner.’ ‘Well, it was a nice open at any rate,’ Sara said. ‘I’m here, aren’t I?’ She gave him a wink. To Noah it sounded like the world’s most sceptical compliment. Was she disappointed it wasn’t bullshit? He Yes, she was—and he couldn’t believe it. Taking a girl realised he couldn’t read her; but, of course, that was always a given. His Adam’s apple dug deep as he dragged was…whatever, here she was. Besides— some fortitude into his throat. ‘Good to know. What about 18 WQ
you?’ Like so many men before him. ‘What about me?’ The happenings around her came into focus: cars pulling over; sirens howling; people on their phones, one ‘You like Tinder?’ intentions for the umpteenth time that day. Where’d Noah go? question, he didn’t even have time to regret it— She moved around the wreck and found Noah sitting on ‘Shit—’ whispered the Uber driver—the car jerked— Noah’s thoughts ceased. His head whipped from the driver dress over her knees…like it fucking mattered. to Sara, who was staring at the car careening towards her. They looked upon their bodies, hung like spent piñatas. he reached for her— Firemen jumped into action and did their commendable Why did you have to say that? best, but tonight the Jaws of Life were too little, too late. She had to remind herself that not everyone was a fan of Their bodies were snipped from their perches, reefed brutal honesty. But could he really be that…what was that from the wreckage, passed onto plastic boards, bagged word? ‘Virtuous’? No— and tagged like cargo… ‘Shit—’ whispered the Uber driver—the car jerked— She could barely bring herself to look at him again. She Her hands pressed up against the window. She only had was incredulous that in this whole time he hadn’t said time for a sharp breath that caught in her throat— a word; but she couldn’t exactly have a go at him for it because the total amount of words she’d uttered since A long moment passed—but only a moment—in which memories kaleidoscoped up from her subconscious, danced past the forefront of her mind, and then blipped But, frankly, what was there to say? away. She suddenly felt light, as if gravity had just released her from its grip. Sara heard the car DA-DAH-DAH-DHOMP to a standstill. She found herself kneeling on bitumen. She instinctively looked to the direction of the sound— in the back of the car, her body hung limp, upside down. In the dark comedy of her life, she heard the narrator equivocate: Sara was taken aback. She rose to her feet and saw Noah, as he too rose upright from the other side of the wreck. His countenance was The Uber driver crawled out of the wreck. The prick was bleeding from the ear, and that was about it. He was due to do that. When she looked back toward Noah, their eyes met. She told herself to look away, but she was never good at following her own advice—and, let’s be honest, who was? She could see the windows to his soul had just shed their panes…and he was so sorry. WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 19
The emergency vehicles drove away. The onlookers dispersed. The only trace of their death was the sawdust Her un-paned eyes scolded him, and she regretted it strewn across the road, slowly soaking up oil, blood, and immediately. In the dark comedy of her life, here was the entrails. cruellest trick: she’d known him in person for a handful of hours only, but it was plenty of time to know he was too You know that feeling, when you can feel someone’s good for her. eyes on you? Sara realised it occurs even in death. In her She might’ve enjoyed being accompanied home too, but of trying to conjure Just the Right Words. She wondered if she loathed to make small talk. she should put him out of his misery, tell him they didn’t exist— She didn’t know it, but it was something they had in common. ‘I should walk you home,’ Noah said. She almost laughed. In the dark comedy of her life, that Luke currently teaches English at Trinity Bay State High School, was solid gold. Cairns. A graduate from The University of Queensland, he has previously worked as a freelance copywriter/editor, and continues to pursue a writing career in his spare time. be that…what was that word? ‘Earnest’? Didn’t cut it. ‘Romantic’? Hopeless. GENRECON IS THE PREMIER FESTIVAL OF GENRE WRITING IN AUSTRALIA. THE COMPETITION, IN ITS INAUGURAL YEAR, WAS Hopeless…No… He was a Helpless Romantic. THEMED POLTERGEISTS AND PETTICOATS. WINNERS RECEIVE 5 HRS MENTORING WITH DR KIM WILKINS, PUBLICATION AND VOUCHERS. CLOSED. WRITERS’ PLAN SAT JAN 18| 10.30AM - 4.30PM | 1 DAY WORKSHOP Reach your 2020 writing goals by crafting your very own TUTOR writers’ plan. Lori-Jay Ellis As a writer, it can be difficult to think about large overarching TICKETS goals, whether it is to get your first draft done, polish and $100 – $190 prepare your work for submission, or build your author network and brand. Writers’ Plan is a course that turns these intimidating goals into four achievable blocks: the sustainability of the writer, engagement with an audience, publishing schedule, and craft and conference planning. With CEO of Queensland Writers’ Centre, Lori-Jay Ellis, learn how to be prepared for annual “I found the Writers’ Plan workshop opportunities, competitions, and conferences, plan your online extremely helpful and it has inspired activity, build your audience engagement, and of course, keep me to begin work on my novel. on top of your writing! You will walk away with a clear, concise, and exciting view of your future writing life for the next twelve I have begun the process of setting months. specific, measurable, accountable, realistic and timely writing goals and Through group work, individual meetings, and activities, find I am now able to map out an you will have a clear idea of how to do the following: achievable plan for the year.” • Make a personal plan so you can sustain yourself - Paul Herschell, an aspiring writer. writing. • Learn who your audience is and take the steps to engage with them. • Develop a publishing schedule. • Prepare for annual competitions, opportunities, and conferences. • Stay inspired with your craft and keep focussed on your writing future. 20 WQ
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Wicked Obscenity By Nicole Walsh Inside, the still and calm of an orderly, organised house. come inside. You prepared a room?” Outside, the landscape jumped and jigged and jived. She pointed eagerly. Watchful of neighbours, Miss Elouise Hampton smuggled the carefully cloaked, discretely disguised painter into her “With the things I sent around?” living room. “Of course.” He clutched the wall, sickened. Miss Elouise Hampton rocked her weight, trembling with “Would you like to sit?” she fretted. nerves. The painter sighed and pushed to his feet. “Please.” “That very large tree?” he pointed. “Some refreshments?” “Yes.” “Not yet.” “And Mr Buckward?” “You’re unwell?” “Waiting.” “Motion-sick. The landscape.” The painter forced a tired smile. “I see,” Miss Elouise Hampton murmured. She did not. “Let’s get it started.” pathways of softened dirt across which grass and weeds zigzagged their own zany journeys. Rocks rolled and revealed a landscape of rocks and grass shifting Eastward. romped, leaving obscure messages in the dust. Trees of all sizes marched their seasonal journey North. The shifting slash of shadows criss crossed the dust. “You requested the curtains closed?” The painter’s stomach instantly soured. He locked his “Please.” smile in place as he followed the nervous couple across the bare, abandoned dust of the yard. He forced himself The painter looked better. The stillness inside the house to study the slowly ploughing tree, the sullenly tilted was soothing to his sensibilities. Outside, a deep groan mailbox on its weekly pilgrimage up the street and the and grind marked the slow, seasonal movement of a huge edge of shy grassland gracing the hilltop. tree. The painter watched the shadows shift around the edge of the curtains. His breath caught. Miss Elouise Hampton wrung her hands nervously: “How do we start?” Mr Morton Buckward dropped to one knee, extending his hands upward. Miss Elouise Hampton touched his “Position yourselves. I will spend a moment watching, then 22 WQ
Even as a very old woman, Mrs Elouise Buckward had to She looked at the painter, and he nodded. He looked decidedly ill. landscape, the wicked obscenity of unchanging stillness. “Perfect.” “Such a queer thing,” she murmured, enchanted. “Are you sure?” she worried. “The tree, the letter-box...?” “Yes.” “The angle?” Nicole’s short story was the August winner of our monthly writing competition Right Left Write, which is run through the Pen & Pixel enewsletter. Many writers are now using the competition to inspire them to create a short piece every month. We even The painter bolted inside, hand to his mouth. He swooned have school English classes using it to help inspire students to on the couch until his head stopped spinning, then forced write. We hope Nicole’s story success will inspire you to put pen himself upright to paint. to paper and send your writing out into the world. By the following evening it was done: the tree; the letterbox; the dusty trail; the two beautiful young people, caught in the moment of proposal. By the time they were OUR MONTHLY WRITING COMPETITION IS DESIGNED TO KEEP YOU WRITING WHEN MOMENTUM PLATEAUS. DECEMBER’S wed the painting hung behind a screen in their bedroom, WRITING PROMPT IS WORLDS COLLIDE. replacing the landscape of her mother’s own proposal, ENTER HERE: HTTPS://WWW.SURVEYMONKEY.COM/R/F9LLPRW dwarfed by the same ancient tree. THE CHILDREN’S BOOK COUNCIL OF AUSTRALIA (VIC BRANCH) INC MAURICE SAXBY CREATIVE DEVELOPMENT PROGRAM a two-week mentorship in Melbourne from 17th Aug – 2nd Sept in 2020. Applicants are invited to submit one the following: • up to three children’s picture book texts (with or without illustrations); • one only younger reader manuscript; • one onlyYoung Adult manuscript; Submissions must be accompanied by a covering letter stating reasons for applying and a CV including contact details. Send via email to: Helen Chamberlin, Acting Coordinator, Maurice Saxby Creative Development Program at helenchamberlin@tpg.com.au or mail to Helen Chamberlin, 4/238 The Avenue, Parkville Vic. 3052. ENTRIES CLOSE 31ST January 2020 WINNERS ANNOUNCED TUESDAY 30TH APRIL 2020 WWW.QLDWRITERS.ORG.AU.MAGAZINE 23
Competitions & Opportunities Queensland Writers Centre Hal Porter Short Story Moth Poetry Prize Writing Competition 2020 Competition 2019 (Irish Magazine Competition) Closes 13th December 2019 Entry Fee: $10 Closes 31st December 2019 Closes 31st December 2019 Australian writers are invited to enter a short story, written in any style for the Entry Fee: €15 per poem Entry Fee: $55 The competition is open for a single, Turning page to screen. The Adaptable be original works, in English, and must unpublished poem. No line limit, and program gets writers pitch ready to not have been previously accepted for the entry can be on any subject, Please present their publication-ready stories to publication, which includes websites. Any enter online, or send your poem(s) with producers at a market day. style of story is acceptable. Number of a cheque or postal order with the entry Apply now at: entries are unlimited. Entries must not form and cover letter attached. More queenslandwriters.org.au/competitions exceed 2,500 words and only the title information, visit themothmagazine.com. of the story, not the author’s name, is to appear on the manuscript. 2020 Bush Poetry Writers Stringybark Short Story Competition 2020 Calibre Essay Prize Awards 2019 Closes 31st January 2020 Closes 15th January 2020 Closes 19th January 2020 Entry Fee: $5 Entry Fee: $15 - $25 Entry Fee: $14 for one story, $26 for two As part of the 2020 Bush Poetry stories, $36 for three stories (max) Festival program, there will be a writer’s The Calibre Essay Prize is open to all competition for poetry. There will be two essayists writing in English. They seek Entries are open-themed, but must have sections; Open and Emerging Poets (who essays of between 2,000 and 5,000 a link, no matter how tenuous, to Australia have not won a writer’s competition.) words on any subject. Essays of all kinds: and suitable for readers over the age of There will be a $5.00 entry fee and personal or political, literary or speculative, sixteen. Words limited to 1,500. Prizes $100.00 prize money for each section. traditional or experimental are welcomed. awarded to the winners are valued at over Please send entries to;Irene Conner, PO $1,000 in cash and books. For submission Box 584, Jurien Bay WA 6156 or email to requirements, visit stringybarkstories.net. iconner21@wn.com.au. Somerset National Poetry Hawkeye Publishing Maurice Saxby Creative Manuscript Development + Development Program Prize Publication Prize Closes 31st January 2020 The Children’s Book Council of Australia children’s and Young Adult writers and/ Closes 6th December 2019 or illustrators a two-week mentorship Closes 20 December 2019 in Melbourne from 17 August to 2 Entry Fee: $15 September 2020.Applicants are invited Entry Fee: $45 to submit one the following: up to three The Somerset National Poetry Prize is open to all current secondary students, Open to Australian Residents. Accepting children’s picture book texts (with or who must be under 19 years of age as Fiction and Non-Fiction (no short stories without illustrations);one only younger at the date of close of entries. The entry or plays). Word limit of maximum 95,000 reader manuscript;one only Young Adult must be an original work of no more words in length. Applicants must submit manuscript;an illustration folio – in a PDF than 50 lines. Theme of competition is of their manuscript, and a one-page plan accompanied by a covering letter stating open. Students may submit multiple demonstrating to judges that the applicant reasons for applying and a CV including entries, with an entry fee for each understands their audience, knows how to contact details. submission. More information, visit reach them, and can successfully continue www.storyfest.com.au. with the self-publishing of their book at the completion of the prize package. 24 WQ
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