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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

       This week, we have been thinking about the
             impact our writing has on the reader.

     We are focusing on the extra bits of information
                that can be shared with the reader.

             Why are those small details of extra
                        information so important?
This week, we have been thinking about the impact our writing has on the reader - Surrey Street Primary ...
English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

        Adding extra bits of information can help the
                                         reader:

              - visualise (build an image in their head)

       - sympathise (with characters or themes in the
                   text by pulling on their emotions)

                          - understand the context

     We should aim to make the reader...

    think something!                               want to do something!

                                 feel something!
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

            Today, we are going to be focusing on
                             figurative language.

             We have studied figurative language
                       throughout years 5 and 6.

         There are so many different types of
        figurative - how many can you think of?
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

                    Brilliant! Read through the examples of each
                          one to make sure that you are familiar!

                     Comparing one
                     thing to another
                       using 'like' or
                            'as'.

                                                          When one thing
                                                          is described as
                                                              another.

                     When several
                       words in a
                       phrase or
                     sentence start
                     with the same
                         sound.

                                                           Words which
                                                           sound like the
                                                             thing they
                                                             represent.

                        Giving non­
                      human things
                     features/actions
                       only humans
                           have.

                                                             An extreme/
                                                           impossible idea
                                                             used to gain
                                                           maximum effect.
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

                         Remind yourself of anything you may have forgotton...

                                                                What is figurative
                                                                      language?

                                                              https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/
                                                                     articles/zxk7kty

                                   Similes and
                                    metaphors
                            https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/
                            topics/zfkk7ty/articles/z9tkxfr

                                                                     Alliteration

                                                              https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/
                                                              topics/zfkk7ty/articles/zq4c7p3

                                Onomatopoeia

                           https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/
                          topics/z4mmn39/articles/z8t3g82

                                                                   Personification

                                                               https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/
                                                              topics/zfkk7ty/articles/zw9p8mn

                                   Hyperbole

                             https://www.youtube.com/
                              watch?v=a0ZAnD-zLQU
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

                               Quick brain buster questions:

                         She sells sea shells on the sea shore is...
                          a) onomatopoeia        b) alliteration       c) a hyperbole

                       The roots of the trees grabbed mercilessly at
                         his ankles as he fled through the green.
                             a) personification       b) simile      c) metaphor

                      Have you played the game 'Among Us'? It's the
                       best thing in the history of the entire universe!
                              a) simile      b) alliteration      c) a hyperbole

                                    A loud crash startled him!
                          a) a hyperbole       b) metaphor         c) onomatopoeia

                         The nurse had a smile that lit up the room.
                             a) metaphor        b) personification         c) simile

                                       BONUS QUESTION
                         Read the sentence. Which answer is the odd one out?

                       The wind spoke gentle whispers to her whilst
                            she wondered though the woods.
                           a) alliteration    b) personification         c) metaphor

                                     Check your answers on the next slide...
This week, we have been thinking about the impact our writing has on the reader - Surrey Street Primary ...
English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

                                Quick brain buster questions:

                         She sells sea shells on the sea shore is...
                         a) onomatopoeia         b) alliteration      c) a hyperbole

                       The roots of the trees grabbed mercilessly at
                         his ankles as he fled through the green.
                             a) personification        b) simile     c) metaphor

                      Have you played the game 'Among Us'? It's the
                       best thing in the history of the entire universe!
                              a) simile      b) alliteration     c) a hyperbole

                                    A loud crash startled him!
                          a) a hyperbole       b) metaphor         c) onomatopoeia

                         The nurse had a smile that lit up the room.
                             a) metaphor         b) personification      c) simile

                                          BONUS QUESTION
                         Read the sentence. Which answer is the odd one out?

                       The wind spoke gentle whispers to her whilst
                          she wondered though the woodlands.
                           a) alliteration    b) personification      c) metaphor

                                 The sentence includes
                             alliteration and personification.
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

                     But why is figurative language important?

                     What impact does it have on the reader?

                                      Remember Juno?

                  Yesterday's lesson showed us how extra information can help
                    us manipulate the images the reader creates in their head.
                   Now that you have this image in your head, how does it
                                         make you feel?

                  Maybe you found the scenario quite comical because you could
                            already predict what was going to happen.

                  You may have even been able to relate to the scenario because
                  you have a pet of your own and experienced something like this
                               before. Did it make you feel angry?

                  Maybe you felt sorry for Juno because he shouldn't have been
                                           left alone...
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

      Using figurative language in your writing pulls on
      the reader's heart strings. We have an element
      of control over what we want the reader to feel!

                                   The tears were
      His heart was                                    His soft
                                    carving new
       racing at a                                     shaking
                                   paths through
      million miles                                 suggested for
                                       his fur.
         per hour.                                  someone stop
                                                       his sobs.

        He felt lower                                The guilt was
         than the                                   swallowing him
       deepest valley.                                  whole.
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English ­ Friday ­ Figurative Language

       Friday 15th January 2021                             There is no work in
                                                           your CGP books today.

       Figurative Language
                                                Let's practise...

       1. Write your DUMTUMS in your purple book.

       2. Copy the sentence into your book. State whether
       feature of figurative language you think the sentence is.

       For example:
       The floorboards moaned as I tiptoed across the room - personification.

          1. Don't you feel well? You're as white as a sheet.

          2. The model's beautiful teeth were peals in his smile.

          3. The spicy food dances around my taste buds.

          4. Assembly usually drags on for hours.

          5. The single chair sat miserably in the corner of the
          room.

          6. The movie star's dazzling diamonds were draped
          around her neck.

          7. I accidentally smacked my head on the open door.

          8. Dad was almost as hairy as a gorilla.

          9. Our new car is faster than the speed of light.

          10. You are my sunshine!
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